For my class with Dr. Augsberger, entitled; Grief, Loss, Death, and Dying, we had to design some type of creative project to present to our small groups within the class. I have always been fond of writing poetry, but I thought that in order to present my thoughts and feelings about the subject of Suffering clearly, a rap would be appropriate. So here is my rap about our claims of Suffering, which so easily become part of our language in relation to our walk with Christ. Tell me what you think?
You speak of suffrin'
It ain't suffrin' that you speakin'
Wounds heal too quickly
Cuz the gash is deep and ugly
One, two, three/ ain't it pretty that I'm bleedin'
Oh; so, so, sorry, did I step on what you preachin'
Oops, my life meant somethin'
To the great God in Heaven
What about the violence that causes all this suffrin'
Just for the sake, of whose Corporation?
Where is the vision, reflectin' God's creation?
Creation includes the children, who are runnin', fallin', playin'
Why is our freedom 'bout hoardin' and consumin'
Causes all this suffrin', we say, "Not in our nation"
Christian nation, really? it ain't seen in what you speakin'
Speakin', preachin', livin' walkin', dyin', oh yes, risin'
Where is the one who was sweaty, grimy, speakin'?
Speakin' 'bout a kingdom,
Not big houses, foolish livin'
It is askin' for a lot in this new way of livin'
Risin' from the dead?
You've gotta be kiddin'
Life, death, cross; simply way to resurrection?
Spiritualized, glorified, all has been completed
Heaven, the after life, is all that is needed
The Cross, the shame, the life of suffrin'
Tell me what I want to hear, I ain't goin' for any other
You speak of suffrin'
Yet have everythin' provided
Yet this anxiety, still has not subsided
The way which is spoken
Is spoken through the pain
The pain has brought life,
Not another human gain.
11 comments:
nice rap!
Thanks bro, nice playing ball with you, sorry for all the fouls. :)
i'm not sure i'm buying anything under the genre of rap, hip hop or otherwise with Paul Pace attached to it. But, nice thoughts.
Haaaaaaaaaaa. Brother Paul, I'm glad you're the sports coordinator next year...Cause I get to heckle you about the rap record deal you recently signed. JC Records? :O
Just messing man. Good substance. In fact, I'd like to hear you perform this in the Garth next week. Make it happen. I have the equipment ready to go.
P.S. You might be the first white rapper I know personally. What an honor.
P.S.S. You're great buddy.
First, I would like to thank JC for the props, very nice comments, very much appreciated.
Secondly, Tx, which I am guessing means something about Texas?
Texas, commenting on rapping?
Would it be better if I was wearing a Cowboy hat, snake skin Cowboy boots, and spurs?
Just kidding, thanks for the comments also. :)
Sup P-Squared?!
Yo man! You got skilz. You should totally take this to the next level. I don't even know what that means but you should do that.
Word. Peace.
Thank you for the comments.
Seriously, this rhyme started because I wanted to think of a way to express myself, and to say something that I truly believed in.
Oh, I get it; P-Squared; like Paul Pace. Makes sense.
See ya'.
Great lyrics, as a poet I always appreciate a good rhyme.
"Don't mind the hatas
cuz they just hatin'.
Their played out just
like Gary Peyton.
Just keep rhymin',keep climbin'
and steady escalatin'......."
sorry, just wanted to mention that "the Glove" is played out.
(You don't know me, I'm a friend of Michael DeFazio's) -cK21
paul. wow, man, you really do havea gift with creative communication. this actually gave me some chills.
peace
cpz
Anonymous, I talked to Michael DeFazio and he said that you can definitely rhyme. I saw one of your posts on his blog, so I now know that it is legit. :)
Thanks for the post, I appreciate the affirmation, nice to have met ya', Word. Peace.
Paxton, also thanks for the comments, it means a lot coming from someone who is gifted with an ability to articulate the message of the gospel, but since you are sitting next to me, I already had told you. Peace.
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